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PLEASE CRITIQUE - Epic/Mysterious style track
Last post Sun, Jul 24 2011 by Composer_Larkin, 5 replies.
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Posted on Thu, Jun 09 2011 19:23
by rtaube02
Joined on Mon, Aug 20 2007, Sydney, Australia, Posts 7

Hi everyone,

Can you please have a listen to my newest composition title "Creation".

The full strings are entirely Appassionata, and I've used the Soprano Choir to give it richness.   

Any thoughts or suggestions would be great.  Thanks!

YouTube - Creation

Posted on Mon, Jun 20 2011 16:22
by Mayyar Namek
Joined on Wed, Jun 01 2011, Posts 27
beautiful, i like the arrangement and i think it made the atmosphere with its simple but well used instruments, i really like the atmosphere, it's dark but enlightened, mysterious but somehow innocent and dreamy :)
the one thing that stood to me the most is that the track didn't sound complete to me in terms of music and thoughts, meaning i couldn't get a result from tracking its story, the climax ended without completing the plot so to speak.

i hope this sounds beneficial to you and have a nice composition :)
Posted on Mon, Jun 20 2011 21:17
by rtaube02
Joined on Mon, Aug 20 2007, Sydney, Australia, Posts 7

Yeah thanks for that!  I agree.  It's something that I'm still trying to work through with most of my compositions.  I believe it might be a bit off ADD, where as I get bored with the track so I end up concluding it pre maturely.  I need have more patients to fully develop the idea.  

Posted on Tue, Jun 21 2011 15:34
by Mayyar Namek
Joined on Wed, Jun 01 2011, Posts 27
yes it happens, i really get you, i have stuff that's left on the hard drive to be completed later as well :D
one of the ways i fight this impatience is to wait till the idea is complete in my head and soul, till i know about what exactly i am going to write about, then i start creating melodies
Posted on Sun, Jul 24 2011 13:49
by Composer_Larkin
Joined on Tue, Jul 28 2009, Posts 18

It reminds me a little of John Adams towards the end.. very cool. 

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