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Last post Sun, May 11 2014 by Fiver, 3 replies.
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Posted on Tue, May 06 2014 03:11
by GRHM
Joined on Mon, Oct 21 2013, Posts 30

 This is an orchestral track I recently made:  https://soundcloud.com/eironic/journey  

I'd greatly appreciate any feedback, and if there are any aspects that you think could use improvement, please let me know.  Thanks so much in advance.

Posted on Tue, May 06 2014 10:59
by GoranTch
Joined on Tue, Mar 14 2006, Berlin, Germany, Posts 524

Again, excellent arrangement and very idiomatic performance. Imo, most room for betterment lies in the same area as with the other piece you posted - more spatial depth and ambience.

Posted on Sun, May 11 2014 23:21
by Fiver
Joined on Mon, Sep 09 2013, Posts 49
Hey there OP, altogether a nice mix of instruments, and the change of tone and speed at the end was very effective, I thought. Good harmonic progressions and voice leading.

I agree with what the other poster said, namely about the need for more 'ambience' or space, but I honestly don't know what that translates to aside from "more reverb on certain instruments?". Aside from this, possibly a B section to break up the main theme a little might be effective, but that depends on what you're going for musicwise.

I liked it, altogether! If you have a moment, I'd love to get some mixing tips from you on my piece (posted in this forum today).
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