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Hello, Yesterday I finished my composition using Vienna Dimension Strings, Vienna Suite and Cubase 7 ( composition written before in Sibelius 7.5, and transferred to Cubase later on) I would like to ask you what need to be made better, and what are my weak points. I want to learn something, so don't worry, criticize, but in constructive way, please :) this is the link: https://soundcloud.com/s...-comp-sebastian-zawadzkithanks in advance!!
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On first listen, it sounds harmonically interesting, in a good way, but it's like a series of unconnected ideas. I listen for that because I've received that criticism about my own compositions. I'd like to hear more form and development of ideas. I can't do it well, but the composers I like did.
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Hi Sebastian, This is a surprising piece in many ways. I do like the harmony turns and unusual connections. It certainly has many good ideas and sounds very decent. You did a marvellous job with the articulations, the mixing and rendition. Thanks for sharing it! Max
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Hey!
Thank for all replies!
It all means for me much. What do you think about reverb, isn't to much of it here? For my taste now I feel, that it's too much of it..
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That is a matter of taste and sense of realism. What do you prefer? Personally, I like the close recording in a rather small ambience, but that doesn't fit fot all genres and styles, nor for all types of orchestras. Max
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