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Hi Jobauma,
this is an interesting idea, maybe even a meta-idea, not a complete work so I won't comment on the compostional merits. Did remind of Arvo Pärt's music a little bit.
My complaint would be about counterpoint, the voices compete (for atention) with each other sometimes. Also, maybe you could cleanup low-mids a bit (around 250-500Hz).
Cheers,
Crusoe.
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There isn't much to it is there.
There are a lot of nice harmonics going on but it does sound a bit muddy to my ears in the lower frequencies.
Not sure about the name. Are you trying to give a musical account of the plight of the Syrian Refugees? Honestly, it sounded more serene or even uplifting to me.
I'm sorry, I just realized that this was just a sketch. My apologies.
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