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[Jobauma]

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[crusoe]

Hi Jobauma,

this is an interesting idea, maybe even a meta-idea, not a complete work so I won't comment on the compostional merits. Did remind of Arvo Pärt's music a little bit.

My complaint would be about counterpoint, the voices compete (for atention) with each other sometimes. Also, maybe you could cleanup low-mids a bit (around 250-500Hz).

Cheers,

Crusoe.

[jasensmith]

There isn't much to it is there.

There are a lot of nice harmonics going on but it does sound a bit muddy to my ears in the lower frequencies.

Not sure about the name.  Are you trying to give a musical account of the plight of the Syrian Refugees?  Honestly, it sounded more serene or even uplifting to me.

I'm sorry, I just realized that this was just a sketch.  My apologies.