@bbelius said:
Hi Sam, Hi William,
thank you both for your feedback. I tried to tweak it a little more:
I have changed the volume of the strings (and triangle), as well as the breath CC for the App strings in comparison to the Orch. strings.
I also removed the maximizer in the master bus for more dynamic.
I did not replace the solo soprano with the choir because it did not sound good to me. But I tried to improve the transitions of the solo soprano by tweaking attack, legato blur and overlapping midi notes. I think it sounds better, but I would like to hear your opinion.
Best, Ben
Ooooh, I like it a lot better without the Maximizer. Everything breathes a lot more. The strings sound great (maybe a bit on the quiet side now? Maybe you could layer them with the orch strings...), so much more lush and closer to the original. Triangle doesn't jump out, all the parts weave and flow. It's very, very nice!
As for the solo soprano, there are parts that sound much better to me. I've puzzled over why, and I think I came up with some helpful feedback. In 3:05-3:10 in your piece, the voice sounded just fine for me. For the majority of the rest of it, something was off. The difference, I found, was twofold:
1) In how often and quickly you switched between vowel sounds
2) In how detached the legato was
My curiousity piqued by William's comment, I listened to some of Guy Bacos' demos of the solo soprano voice. I noticed that he varies the vowels a whole hell of a lot and, in many pieces, creates a more gradual attack on each note rather than a portamento-like legato. I think this is to simulate the formation of a vowel after a consonant. For example, listen to 0:30-0:50 in "Liebe und Verzweiflung - Soprano & Baritone" in the Solo Voices demo section. He seems to change vowels almost every note, creates a subtle attack fade-in, and avoids portamento except in a melismatic or accent context. He also uses the sampled breath noises to further sell it.
Then, listening back to your piece, I noticed that there's a lot of staying on the "aah" vowel and sliding between pitches. While this would sound good with a real voice, I think it exposes the artificiality of a fake one. It reminds me of another piece with a very similar tone and instrumentation (albeit much lesser in composition):
Moonlit Butterfly
It's more subtle than in Guy's demo, but I do notice distinct attacks as well as vowel switching/morphing on almost every note. (There's also a wash of reverb and counter-melodies, but, hey...)
I hope any of that was useful. Sorry for rambling on!
Peace,
- Sam