Very good for a VSL novice ;-)
I prefer the second version, to me it sounds the least "flat" spatially (it has, among other advantages, a larger percieved distance of the brass from woods & strings). In general, the spatial setup would greatly benefit from optimized dry-to-wet stereo width relations and (here comes the usual suspect ;-) "stretching out" the Z-axis (more pronounced distance relations between different orchestra sections).